Post by Ginta Toramizu on Nov 2, 2006 0:51:03 GMT -5
this is a story i made up and its not finished im still working on it so this is what i got
In the year 21XX, a boy named Riki Hiroshi has moved to a small peaceful town, but one day in the lab with his father, he was walking around when he tripped on something and fell into the testing chamber. His dad didn’t notice that his son fell in; his dad started the experiment to successfully destroy the last pieces of one of the most dangerous creatures ever to roam the planet. All of a sudden he was struck with a bolt of lightning; he was fused with the bugs, and when Riki came out in a form that looked like the combined version of Chromis and Agre the, two legendary beasts that rampaged and destroyed the city over 90 years ago has returned.
Today, Riki was on his way to the lab to be scanned and see how his new form will react to various types of weapons. When Riki got to the lab he knew what he had to do. One of the scientists came up to him and told him, “Okay Riki, just stand here and don’t move. We are going to see how your new body works against various types of weapons ok,” Riki answered very frightened while he walked up to the platform surrounded by machinery “Okay. Is my Dad Haruko Hiroshi here?” they told him that he was sent to a military base to helping test new types of aircrafts, “Oh ok,” replied Riki to the scientist. Outside a Soldier is running toward the lab as if an enemy was in there “I’m going to get you, you little freak” the soldier stops and walks to the door and tells himself what he has to do over and over in his head. The soldier comes in and shoots everyone as if he was killing for the fun of hearing innocent scientists die. After the shooting everyone was dead except for Riki. Riki runs and hides before the soldier notices him, but the soldier heard a noise. Riki tries to get out, but the soldier sees him.
“Your coming with me kid” Riki looks at the bodies of all the dead scientists, “ what makes you think I will come along with you” the soldier shows Riki the person he’s holding and ends up to be Rikis’ father “this is why” said the soldier while holding his gun at his fathers’ forehead. Riki saw his dad and said, “Oh no dad. Let my dad go, I’ll do whatever you want, but let my father go” the soldier smiled “ok come here” said the soldier with an evil grin on his face “all you have to do is come with me” the soldier walked to his truck over a mile away
As Riki followed he was wondering “should I really do this, yes I should for my father” the soldier grabbed Riki, threw him on the truck, tied him down, and left. Riki was praying and hoping his mother doesn’t find out this has happened. The truck stopped the soldier untied Riki “ ok all you have to do for me you little freak is to be one of my weapons” Riki questioned, “why do you want me to be one of your weapons?”
The soldier responded “so I can rule the world with my megabot and yourself.” Riki walked up to him and responded, “Can I just go outside for a moment” he looked at the soldier “why of course it will be the last time you are alone.” Riki walked outside “now all I have to do is send a high frequency that can reach the military base” Riki goes to the scrap yard behind the hidden base and makes a machine, “just punch in the note and press send” Riki said while typing on the machine “ all I have to do is to wait” the soldier came up behind him “wait for what you sent a distress signal didn’t you, that’s it you’re coming with me.” The soldier grabbed Riki and dragged him back to the abandoned hangar “you are going to be the power source for my robot, and the world will see how I can control the greatest amount of power to exists” Riki looks at the ground while saying “where do I go.” The soldier escorts him to the back of the robot “you just lay here and.” The soldier closes the door and activates the machine, Riki was scared and suddenly was struck with lightning again and his power was being drained “aaaaaahhhhhhh feeling weaker can’t move” Riki was yelling while the machine was draining his power bit by bit.
When the distress signal reached the military base they set out for the abandoned hangar. All of a sudden the right wall of the hangar collapsed, when the smoke cleared the Worldtopia military Army (WMA) had the hangar surrounded, while the robot looked around the WMA soldiers took Rikis’ father and untie him Riki saw that his father is safe and told the soldiers to fire, The soldiers fired one bullet hit Riki in the forehead and knocked him out. The next day Riki was in the hospital the WMA commander came in and told Riki “your father was shot with a blast from the megabot and we got news that he died this morning in the hospital.” Riki gets up off the bed “your lying to me no, no this isn’t true my father couldn’t have died.” Riki runs out falling down cause of drowsiness “I got to show them my father is alive."
The next day Riki was outside crying “they were right my dad is dead I can’t go home my mother will think I’m a freak, I should just kill myself, or I can use my abilities for good, and I should bring him back by fusing him with the same bugs I was fused with.” Riki goes and retrieves the body of his father and takes it to the lab “dad you will come back I know you will” said Riki while some tears came out of his eye.
After Riki retrieved his fathers’ corpse he went to the lab his father used to work in, the same lab he was transformed into a monster. When Riki got to the lab he put his father in the same chamber he was in he went to get Chromis bugs, but got Agre bugs without knowing it.
He put the corpse in the chamber put in the bugs and started the machine; his fathers’ body was struck with lightning and fused with the bugs. Riki ran to the chamber and as he was looking for his dads’ body he said repeatedly “did it work, I hope it worked” Riki was astonished by the looks and said “if these bugs are the same as mine then he should look like me not like that.” Riki noticed that he had gotten the wrong bugs and put in the bugs of the evil beast Agre “oh crud I gave my dad Agre bugs not Chromis, I have to reverse the experiment” Riki ran to the control pad but the Agre bugs had so much power the building started to collapse. Riki went back to try to stop the monster he had created, it was no use; he fed his dad too many bugs. Riki went to the scrap yard and made a small house. After that he then called his mother to tell her what happened, and he won’t come home until he stops the monster he unleashed.
Later that day a girl about the age of Riki jumped the fence of the scrap yard to get some valuable metal, Riki noticed the girl and walked toward her. The girl was struggling to get a piece of metal out of a pile “pull harder I need this for my cart” she said as she was pulling the metal sheet “Crud I’m not strong enough to pull it out, and if I climb, the pile will come down” she said while she turned her head looking around as if she knows she is not alone. “I wonder if I’m not alone” she said as she hears some pieces of metal fall on the ground “ah ha come out whom ever you are,” Riki walks out “hello need any help.”
“Oh my god what are you,” you may think I’m a monster, but I was fused with the bugs of Chromis, so do you need help or not” the girl stares at him “oh how rude of me, I Am Liyana, I don’t really know my last name since my parents died when I was young who are you,” Riki smiles “I’m Riki Hiroshi Son of the famous scientist Haruko Hiroshi.” Riki and Liyana talked for around five hours. Liyana then left and Riki went to his hut and ate dinner “I wonder if she is up to helping defeat my dad I hope, I hope.”
The next day Riki felt water and it was Liyana throwing ice water at him “I’m awake I’m awake mom” Liyana starts to laugh “I am not your mother you idiot it’s me Liyana from the scrap yard.” Riki started to blush and felt embarrassed “oh hey what are you doing here” he said as he was lying in his bed “I heard you talking about your dad and that you were going to kill him” she said confused.
“Well,” he said scratching the back of his head “so tell me why are you going to kill your father,” said Liyana as she grabbed Riki by the shoulders and starts to shake him “why do you want to kill your father” she yelled at him, “its for a reason you don’t understand and you don’t even know who my father is” he roared back.
“I kind of figured out the guy destroying buildings and floating in mid air is your dad,” she said as his roar startled her.
“Oh he is doing what. Man I knew I should have left him dead,” he said as he looked down, went to the table and ate some canned beans “what do you mean should have left him dead,” Liyana said to Riki. Riki looked up and told her “my dad was shot, and he died in the hospital, I tried to bring him back with Chromis bugs, but I used Agre bugs instead making him angry and enraged with power.” Liyana stares at him “oh my god you created him, that same monster killed my parents,” Riki walks out and Liyana followed he saw that she was following him so he started to walk and of course she would follow “I’m sorry Liyana that Agre killed your parents, but I can’t do anything about it, he is to strong for me I can’t beat him myself I need help.” Liyana starts to think and comes up with an idea “I know I could help you I know how to robots, I could probably make me one and my friend Ruiku knows how to make weapons.”
“Really you think he will help us defeat my father,” Riki said while smiling, “and I think he has friends that will help.” Riki yawned “alright we will do that first thing tomorrow ok” Riki walked back into his hut and laid down, Liyana also followed Riki into the hut, and laid out her sleeping bag.
They are unaware that his dad is on top of the hut and try to brainwash Riki to do evil as well. The next day Riki destroyed the hut and went off with Liyana to go find her friend Ruiku.
“Liyana I have one question for you,” he said as he looked down and stopped walking “what is it Riki,” He looked up at her straight in the eye “why aren’t you scared of me like others.” She tapped her chin with her index finger multiple times “well I am not a normal child and I’m not a wimp like most people.” Riki looked back down “oh, that’s why and its true most people I see the pee in their pants and I’m like oh my god you are grown up get a life.” Liyana Started to laugh, “well it’s true the are grown up they should get a life.” This same conversation between Liyana and Riki went on until they reached the city.
“Where do you think Ruiku is Liyana,” said Riki as he sat behind a tree, “ you know I think he is probably on the computer downloading songs, and playing games” she said as she pointed to a small blue house. Then the both of them started to walk down the hill onwards to Ruikus’ house. When they got there Liyana knocked on the door “Ruiku are you there” she yelled, “what do you want Liyana how many times,” Ruiku was speechless for a matter of seconds, “Oh My God there is a monster behind your back,” he whispered in Liyanas’ ear staring at Riki. Liyana pushes his head away, “I know that, that’s why I came here, and can you help us defeat the monster that is destroying Middletown.” Ruiku looks up at Riki “are you the good guy,” Riki shakes his head “of course you idiot, if I wasn’t I would have destroyed your house by now.” Ruiku looks up and slaps his forehead “no duh or course, I wondered why I asked that question,” he wondered. Riki told Liyana “why do we need help from an idiot,” Liyana looks up at him “he’s not an idiot he is just sleepy. He is always like that Riki.”
“Thank you Liyana I hope we can trust him with equipment that my dad knows how to use,” Ruiku looks up and opens his eyes real big “did you say equipment such as tools, machines, and things used in a lab,” Riki looks at him while he grabs one of his shoulders “yes, and you better not break anything, you got that,” Riki yelled as he shook Ruiku, “ok, ok” Ruiku said in a frightened voice. Riki kept his grasp on Ruiku “hey aren’t you let me go” asked Ruiku as he tried to open Rikis’ hand to go into his house “no I’m taking you to a place so the military can’t find you,” Ruiku thinks as he scratches his chin and tells Riki “why.” Riki looks at him face to face and yells, “if they know your helping me you are considered a wanted boy you little idiot,” Ruiku looks down and tells him sorry; it’s just that I want some cookies.”
“Well get them, and come back I don’t want you to die with the army of your country,” he said as he let go of Ruiku, “don’t be so mean Riki to Ruiku,” Liyana yelled as she pushed him back a little bit. Riki looks down as he tells Liyana why “I guess the monster part of me is taking over,” he said as he put out his arm and charged his cannon. Liyanas’ eyes grow wide “Riki put your arm down,” Rikis’ eyes turn red as he yelled “I shall not,” his buster glows a bright light and he shoots the house. The same house was vaporized and killed a family of eight died, “Riki how could you” said Liyana as a tear came out her eye, his eyes turned back to normal he answered to what Liyana said “could what, what did I do,” Liyana points at the destroyed house so Riki can look, and when Riki looks he looks at his hands and starts to cry “no, I can’t, how could I kill innocent people with these hands,” Liyana looks at him, “but you wanted to you even said so Riki falls on his knees “no I don’t remember it I thought I blacked out.” Liyana goes up to him and puts her and on his shoulder “don’t worry I guess you were right the monster part of you was released for moment making you cruel and enraged with power,” Riki laid on the ground crying.
“What is wrong with me, I feel different it feels like there is a fight between me and a monster inside my body, I think I’m going to lose.” Riki was still on the floor when Liyana sat down and Ruiku also sat down, “don’t worry stay strong inside you can beat it, and you got two friends to help you” said Ruiku as he patted Riki on the back. Riki smiled and got up lifting Ruiku and Liyana “yup I will try to beat it with the help of my friends. Riki walked down the hill as if he was a normal child, Liyana followed pulling Ruiku from the ear “hey, hey, hey what the heck why are you pulling my ear, I didn’t do any thing bad?” Liyana rolled her eyes “you didn’t get up when I got up you retard.” Ruiku looked up as a tear came out of his eye “you could have just told me to get up,” he said as he wiped his eye and sniffled.
In the year 21XX, a boy named Riki Hiroshi has moved to a small peaceful town, but one day in the lab with his father, he was walking around when he tripped on something and fell into the testing chamber. His dad didn’t notice that his son fell in; his dad started the experiment to successfully destroy the last pieces of one of the most dangerous creatures ever to roam the planet. All of a sudden he was struck with a bolt of lightning; he was fused with the bugs, and when Riki came out in a form that looked like the combined version of Chromis and Agre the, two legendary beasts that rampaged and destroyed the city over 90 years ago has returned.
Today, Riki was on his way to the lab to be scanned and see how his new form will react to various types of weapons. When Riki got to the lab he knew what he had to do. One of the scientists came up to him and told him, “Okay Riki, just stand here and don’t move. We are going to see how your new body works against various types of weapons ok,” Riki answered very frightened while he walked up to the platform surrounded by machinery “Okay. Is my Dad Haruko Hiroshi here?” they told him that he was sent to a military base to helping test new types of aircrafts, “Oh ok,” replied Riki to the scientist. Outside a Soldier is running toward the lab as if an enemy was in there “I’m going to get you, you little freak” the soldier stops and walks to the door and tells himself what he has to do over and over in his head. The soldier comes in and shoots everyone as if he was killing for the fun of hearing innocent scientists die. After the shooting everyone was dead except for Riki. Riki runs and hides before the soldier notices him, but the soldier heard a noise. Riki tries to get out, but the soldier sees him.
“Your coming with me kid” Riki looks at the bodies of all the dead scientists, “ what makes you think I will come along with you” the soldier shows Riki the person he’s holding and ends up to be Rikis’ father “this is why” said the soldier while holding his gun at his fathers’ forehead. Riki saw his dad and said, “Oh no dad. Let my dad go, I’ll do whatever you want, but let my father go” the soldier smiled “ok come here” said the soldier with an evil grin on his face “all you have to do is come with me” the soldier walked to his truck over a mile away
As Riki followed he was wondering “should I really do this, yes I should for my father” the soldier grabbed Riki, threw him on the truck, tied him down, and left. Riki was praying and hoping his mother doesn’t find out this has happened. The truck stopped the soldier untied Riki “ ok all you have to do for me you little freak is to be one of my weapons” Riki questioned, “why do you want me to be one of your weapons?”
The soldier responded “so I can rule the world with my megabot and yourself.” Riki walked up to him and responded, “Can I just go outside for a moment” he looked at the soldier “why of course it will be the last time you are alone.” Riki walked outside “now all I have to do is send a high frequency that can reach the military base” Riki goes to the scrap yard behind the hidden base and makes a machine, “just punch in the note and press send” Riki said while typing on the machine “ all I have to do is to wait” the soldier came up behind him “wait for what you sent a distress signal didn’t you, that’s it you’re coming with me.” The soldier grabbed Riki and dragged him back to the abandoned hangar “you are going to be the power source for my robot, and the world will see how I can control the greatest amount of power to exists” Riki looks at the ground while saying “where do I go.” The soldier escorts him to the back of the robot “you just lay here and.” The soldier closes the door and activates the machine, Riki was scared and suddenly was struck with lightning again and his power was being drained “aaaaaahhhhhhh feeling weaker can’t move” Riki was yelling while the machine was draining his power bit by bit.
When the distress signal reached the military base they set out for the abandoned hangar. All of a sudden the right wall of the hangar collapsed, when the smoke cleared the Worldtopia military Army (WMA) had the hangar surrounded, while the robot looked around the WMA soldiers took Rikis’ father and untie him Riki saw that his father is safe and told the soldiers to fire, The soldiers fired one bullet hit Riki in the forehead and knocked him out. The next day Riki was in the hospital the WMA commander came in and told Riki “your father was shot with a blast from the megabot and we got news that he died this morning in the hospital.” Riki gets up off the bed “your lying to me no, no this isn’t true my father couldn’t have died.” Riki runs out falling down cause of drowsiness “I got to show them my father is alive."
The next day Riki was outside crying “they were right my dad is dead I can’t go home my mother will think I’m a freak, I should just kill myself, or I can use my abilities for good, and I should bring him back by fusing him with the same bugs I was fused with.” Riki goes and retrieves the body of his father and takes it to the lab “dad you will come back I know you will” said Riki while some tears came out of his eye.
After Riki retrieved his fathers’ corpse he went to the lab his father used to work in, the same lab he was transformed into a monster. When Riki got to the lab he put his father in the same chamber he was in he went to get Chromis bugs, but got Agre bugs without knowing it.
He put the corpse in the chamber put in the bugs and started the machine; his fathers’ body was struck with lightning and fused with the bugs. Riki ran to the chamber and as he was looking for his dads’ body he said repeatedly “did it work, I hope it worked” Riki was astonished by the looks and said “if these bugs are the same as mine then he should look like me not like that.” Riki noticed that he had gotten the wrong bugs and put in the bugs of the evil beast Agre “oh crud I gave my dad Agre bugs not Chromis, I have to reverse the experiment” Riki ran to the control pad but the Agre bugs had so much power the building started to collapse. Riki went back to try to stop the monster he had created, it was no use; he fed his dad too many bugs. Riki went to the scrap yard and made a small house. After that he then called his mother to tell her what happened, and he won’t come home until he stops the monster he unleashed.
Later that day a girl about the age of Riki jumped the fence of the scrap yard to get some valuable metal, Riki noticed the girl and walked toward her. The girl was struggling to get a piece of metal out of a pile “pull harder I need this for my cart” she said as she was pulling the metal sheet “Crud I’m not strong enough to pull it out, and if I climb, the pile will come down” she said while she turned her head looking around as if she knows she is not alone. “I wonder if I’m not alone” she said as she hears some pieces of metal fall on the ground “ah ha come out whom ever you are,” Riki walks out “hello need any help.”
“Oh my god what are you,” you may think I’m a monster, but I was fused with the bugs of Chromis, so do you need help or not” the girl stares at him “oh how rude of me, I Am Liyana, I don’t really know my last name since my parents died when I was young who are you,” Riki smiles “I’m Riki Hiroshi Son of the famous scientist Haruko Hiroshi.” Riki and Liyana talked for around five hours. Liyana then left and Riki went to his hut and ate dinner “I wonder if she is up to helping defeat my dad I hope, I hope.”
The next day Riki felt water and it was Liyana throwing ice water at him “I’m awake I’m awake mom” Liyana starts to laugh “I am not your mother you idiot it’s me Liyana from the scrap yard.” Riki started to blush and felt embarrassed “oh hey what are you doing here” he said as he was lying in his bed “I heard you talking about your dad and that you were going to kill him” she said confused.
“Well,” he said scratching the back of his head “so tell me why are you going to kill your father,” said Liyana as she grabbed Riki by the shoulders and starts to shake him “why do you want to kill your father” she yelled at him, “its for a reason you don’t understand and you don’t even know who my father is” he roared back.
“I kind of figured out the guy destroying buildings and floating in mid air is your dad,” she said as his roar startled her.
“Oh he is doing what. Man I knew I should have left him dead,” he said as he looked down, went to the table and ate some canned beans “what do you mean should have left him dead,” Liyana said to Riki. Riki looked up and told her “my dad was shot, and he died in the hospital, I tried to bring him back with Chromis bugs, but I used Agre bugs instead making him angry and enraged with power.” Liyana stares at him “oh my god you created him, that same monster killed my parents,” Riki walks out and Liyana followed he saw that she was following him so he started to walk and of course she would follow “I’m sorry Liyana that Agre killed your parents, but I can’t do anything about it, he is to strong for me I can’t beat him myself I need help.” Liyana starts to think and comes up with an idea “I know I could help you I know how to robots, I could probably make me one and my friend Ruiku knows how to make weapons.”
“Really you think he will help us defeat my father,” Riki said while smiling, “and I think he has friends that will help.” Riki yawned “alright we will do that first thing tomorrow ok” Riki walked back into his hut and laid down, Liyana also followed Riki into the hut, and laid out her sleeping bag.
They are unaware that his dad is on top of the hut and try to brainwash Riki to do evil as well. The next day Riki destroyed the hut and went off with Liyana to go find her friend Ruiku.
“Liyana I have one question for you,” he said as he looked down and stopped walking “what is it Riki,” He looked up at her straight in the eye “why aren’t you scared of me like others.” She tapped her chin with her index finger multiple times “well I am not a normal child and I’m not a wimp like most people.” Riki looked back down “oh, that’s why and its true most people I see the pee in their pants and I’m like oh my god you are grown up get a life.” Liyana Started to laugh, “well it’s true the are grown up they should get a life.” This same conversation between Liyana and Riki went on until they reached the city.
“Where do you think Ruiku is Liyana,” said Riki as he sat behind a tree, “ you know I think he is probably on the computer downloading songs, and playing games” she said as she pointed to a small blue house. Then the both of them started to walk down the hill onwards to Ruikus’ house. When they got there Liyana knocked on the door “Ruiku are you there” she yelled, “what do you want Liyana how many times,” Ruiku was speechless for a matter of seconds, “Oh My God there is a monster behind your back,” he whispered in Liyanas’ ear staring at Riki. Liyana pushes his head away, “I know that, that’s why I came here, and can you help us defeat the monster that is destroying Middletown.” Ruiku looks up at Riki “are you the good guy,” Riki shakes his head “of course you idiot, if I wasn’t I would have destroyed your house by now.” Ruiku looks up and slaps his forehead “no duh or course, I wondered why I asked that question,” he wondered. Riki told Liyana “why do we need help from an idiot,” Liyana looks up at him “he’s not an idiot he is just sleepy. He is always like that Riki.”
“Thank you Liyana I hope we can trust him with equipment that my dad knows how to use,” Ruiku looks up and opens his eyes real big “did you say equipment such as tools, machines, and things used in a lab,” Riki looks at him while he grabs one of his shoulders “yes, and you better not break anything, you got that,” Riki yelled as he shook Ruiku, “ok, ok” Ruiku said in a frightened voice. Riki kept his grasp on Ruiku “hey aren’t you let me go” asked Ruiku as he tried to open Rikis’ hand to go into his house “no I’m taking you to a place so the military can’t find you,” Ruiku thinks as he scratches his chin and tells Riki “why.” Riki looks at him face to face and yells, “if they know your helping me you are considered a wanted boy you little idiot,” Ruiku looks down and tells him sorry; it’s just that I want some cookies.”
“Well get them, and come back I don’t want you to die with the army of your country,” he said as he let go of Ruiku, “don’t be so mean Riki to Ruiku,” Liyana yelled as she pushed him back a little bit. Riki looks down as he tells Liyana why “I guess the monster part of me is taking over,” he said as he put out his arm and charged his cannon. Liyanas’ eyes grow wide “Riki put your arm down,” Rikis’ eyes turn red as he yelled “I shall not,” his buster glows a bright light and he shoots the house. The same house was vaporized and killed a family of eight died, “Riki how could you” said Liyana as a tear came out her eye, his eyes turned back to normal he answered to what Liyana said “could what, what did I do,” Liyana points at the destroyed house so Riki can look, and when Riki looks he looks at his hands and starts to cry “no, I can’t, how could I kill innocent people with these hands,” Liyana looks at him, “but you wanted to you even said so Riki falls on his knees “no I don’t remember it I thought I blacked out.” Liyana goes up to him and puts her and on his shoulder “don’t worry I guess you were right the monster part of you was released for moment making you cruel and enraged with power,” Riki laid on the ground crying.
“What is wrong with me, I feel different it feels like there is a fight between me and a monster inside my body, I think I’m going to lose.” Riki was still on the floor when Liyana sat down and Ruiku also sat down, “don’t worry stay strong inside you can beat it, and you got two friends to help you” said Ruiku as he patted Riki on the back. Riki smiled and got up lifting Ruiku and Liyana “yup I will try to beat it with the help of my friends. Riki walked down the hill as if he was a normal child, Liyana followed pulling Ruiku from the ear “hey, hey, hey what the heck why are you pulling my ear, I didn’t do any thing bad?” Liyana rolled her eyes “you didn’t get up when I got up you retard.” Ruiku looked up as a tear came out of his eye “you could have just told me to get up,” he said as he wiped his eye and sniffled.